Collaborative Writing

Today we wrote in groups of 3 to describe what was around us outside. We wrote what we could see, hear, smell, feel and what we thought and felt inside. We came up with some WOW words and some great phrases like "teeny weeny fantail" and "rustling leaves".

Room 8

Room 8 is a Year 1 and 2 class at Hampden Street School in Nelson, New Zealand.


  1. I had fun. I wrote "I can smell the wind". By Victoria

  2. I love writing and I loved doing this. I wrote ,"I can hear the wind going past my face and I can see the green coloured leaves on the tree. I can feel the hard concrete." by Tilly