Describing a Stormy Photo

Eliana started in Room 8 at the end of Term 1 and since then, she has been making amazing progress with her writing.

Check out her description of this photo:

The clouds are booming with darkness. If I was going to go out to the farm, I would be scared. The lightening is blue like the sea and the grass is swishing from side to side.
- Eliana

Room 8

Room 8 is a Year 1 and 2 class at Hampden Street School in Nelson, New Zealand.

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